Some good comments Yasmin, but you really need to get more into the SPECIFIC CONVENTIONS of horror (look back at the work we did on this area). Look at the A3 sheet and see which conventions you have used. Also, you need to put some points at the end of the post about the product AS A TEASER TRAILER - so you will need to write this section onto the post, and explore the conventions of trailers - again use your notes to help you.
Some good comments Yasmin, but you really need to get more into the SPECIFIC CONVENTIONS of horror (look back at the work we did on this area). Look at the A3 sheet and see which conventions you have used. Also, you need to put some points at the end of the post about the product AS A TEASER TRAILER - so you will need to write this section onto the post, and explore the conventions of trailers - again use your notes to help you.
ReplyDeleteAnd it's CANTED, not cantered - that's something horses do!
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